Thursday, July 4, 2019

Show not tell

W.A.L.T How to make show not tell

On Tuesday and Wednesday we did a show not tell exercise and we had to pick a Emotion and I picked shocked this is what I thought might happen.





Her lips were  open wide




Her eyes will be wide open   




Her stomach has butterflies 

In her tummy




Her heart was shaking like if was a big earthquake was pasting by



Her legs were shaking like if the world was shaking




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